Post by elementalfox on Jun 4, 2008 22:44:21 GMT -5
*sigh* one of these days I may change that title.
This will be changed into both a comic and a story but for now it is just written for the comic as it would appear in the comic. So this is just to get the story line down.
It'll be changed later. And things will be added to it later.
The Guardian wars:
Part 1
(Raiku is 17 Kirein is 16 and Jera is 15)
Raiku: ZZzzz *is asleep*
Jera: Heh this is perfect *has just finished setting a trap for Raiku*
Raiku: *a short time later* *yawn* huh……*notices the wire above his nose* ‘Jera has been here again……’ *sigh* ‘to pretend to fall for this or just burst his bubble hmm…’
Jera: I wonder if Raiku is awake yet…*peeks into the room*
Raiku: Good morning Jera.
Jera: wha—what the heck! Your supposed to be covered in chocolate pudding!
Raiku: I thought it was just a waste of pudding so I gave it to the children.
Jera:….grr…..’How does he always know…’
Raiku: Well we should head to class. We don’t want you to get chewed out for skipping again do we.
Jera: what do you mean we . your always the one who shows everyone up in class mister high and mighty.
Raiku: Just because I have common sense and the teachers like my light/lightning element doesn’t mean I think or am better than anyone else in the class. Besides Jera weren’t you the one who showed such good grades and power that you were placed in this grade instead of sticking with your age group.
Jera: Ya well…. Whatever…*slings book bad over shoulder and starts off toward class*
*Kirien appears next to Raiku from behind*
Kirien: another eventful morning Raiku.
Raiku: when is it not around here.
Jera: Oh great miss perfectionist is here…geez would it kill any of you to smile.
Raiku: yes
Jera: grr *storms off into the classroom*
Kirien: Just another normal day.
*Kirien and Raiku walk into the classroom*
Part 2
(Krow is the air guardian for those who know my characters)
*the teacher is talking about the morals each Guardian must have to be good at their job. Raiku, Kirien, and Jera are sitting in the back*
Jera: *whispers to Raiku* Do we really need to be taught this over again. This is like kids stuff.
Raiku: *glances boredly at Jera and whispers* you know the reason they do this is because someone continues to play pranks on others.
Jera: I can’t help it if everyone around here is stuck up and emotionless. I just want to get someone to smile around here. It seems like a crypt around here all the solemn faces.
Kirien: keep quiet you two or you’ll get into trouble.
Jera: we aren’t children anymore. I could take the teacher on an show him a thing or two.
Raiku: Jera… You know that’s wrong.
Jera: *growls*
*a red winged guardian slams the door open and rushes up to the front of the room. He swiftly hands the teacher a note and rushes back out the door. A panicked look appeared on the teachers face as he read the letter to himself*
Teacher: C-cclass is dismissed for today. Go back to your dorms and stay there till you are given your orders.
Raiku: What’s going on. What is so bad that you are forcing us to hide?
Teacher: It appears we are under attack. Some demons have invaded the towns and have started a battle with the humans guardians.
Kirien: But why they never attacked us before.
Teacher: *yells* stop questioning and go to your dorms!
*being practically pushed out the door, Raiku brushes himself off and looks around.*
Raiku: It would appear that everyone is either inside their dorms or in a private meeting
Krow: *looks panicked* oh hello Raiku, Jera, Kirien…eh uh ….
Jera: Krow calm down before you give yourself a heart attack. Honestly, what kind of guardian are you if your always afraid and ready to flee.
Krow:….*poofs into thin air*
Raiku/Kirien: *sigh* idiot
Raiku: *walks over to the main gate of the guardian community.* Do you think that if everyone is inside discussing their options that instead of hiding and being useless that we should patrol the wall of the town instead.
Kirien: I like that idea Raiku.
Jera: *whispers to himself* oh of course you do raiku said it…Anyway... Yes that would be much better than waiting for an order.
Raiku: then lets go but we should stay together so as none of us take the fall alone.
*the three walk out of the safety of the town an begin to walk around the out side of the towns boarders*
Part 3
This will be changed into both a comic and a story but for now it is just written for the comic as it would appear in the comic. So this is just to get the story line down.
It'll be changed later. And things will be added to it later.
The Guardian wars:
Part 1
(Raiku is 17 Kirein is 16 and Jera is 15)
Raiku: ZZzzz *is asleep*
Jera: Heh this is perfect *has just finished setting a trap for Raiku*
Raiku: *a short time later* *yawn* huh……*notices the wire above his nose* ‘Jera has been here again……’ *sigh* ‘to pretend to fall for this or just burst his bubble hmm…’
Jera: I wonder if Raiku is awake yet…*peeks into the room*
Raiku: Good morning Jera.
Jera: wha—what the heck! Your supposed to be covered in chocolate pudding!
Raiku: I thought it was just a waste of pudding so I gave it to the children.
Jera:….grr…..’How does he always know…’
Raiku: Well we should head to class. We don’t want you to get chewed out for skipping again do we.
Jera: what do you mean we . your always the one who shows everyone up in class mister high and mighty.
Raiku: Just because I have common sense and the teachers like my light/lightning element doesn’t mean I think or am better than anyone else in the class. Besides Jera weren’t you the one who showed such good grades and power that you were placed in this grade instead of sticking with your age group.
Jera: Ya well…. Whatever…*slings book bad over shoulder and starts off toward class*
*Kirien appears next to Raiku from behind*
Kirien: another eventful morning Raiku.
Raiku: when is it not around here.
Jera: Oh great miss perfectionist is here…geez would it kill any of you to smile.
Raiku: yes
Jera: grr *storms off into the classroom*
Kirien: Just another normal day.
*Kirien and Raiku walk into the classroom*
Part 2
(Krow is the air guardian for those who know my characters)
*the teacher is talking about the morals each Guardian must have to be good at their job. Raiku, Kirien, and Jera are sitting in the back*
Jera: *whispers to Raiku* Do we really need to be taught this over again. This is like kids stuff.
Raiku: *glances boredly at Jera and whispers* you know the reason they do this is because someone continues to play pranks on others.
Jera: I can’t help it if everyone around here is stuck up and emotionless. I just want to get someone to smile around here. It seems like a crypt around here all the solemn faces.
Kirien: keep quiet you two or you’ll get into trouble.
Jera: we aren’t children anymore. I could take the teacher on an show him a thing or two.
Raiku: Jera… You know that’s wrong.
Jera: *growls*
*a red winged guardian slams the door open and rushes up to the front of the room. He swiftly hands the teacher a note and rushes back out the door. A panicked look appeared on the teachers face as he read the letter to himself*
Teacher: C-cclass is dismissed for today. Go back to your dorms and stay there till you are given your orders.
Raiku: What’s going on. What is so bad that you are forcing us to hide?
Teacher: It appears we are under attack. Some demons have invaded the towns and have started a battle with the humans guardians.
Kirien: But why they never attacked us before.
Teacher: *yells* stop questioning and go to your dorms!
*being practically pushed out the door, Raiku brushes himself off and looks around.*
Raiku: It would appear that everyone is either inside their dorms or in a private meeting
Krow: *looks panicked* oh hello Raiku, Jera, Kirien…eh uh ….
Jera: Krow calm down before you give yourself a heart attack. Honestly, what kind of guardian are you if your always afraid and ready to flee.
Krow:….*poofs into thin air*
Raiku/Kirien: *sigh* idiot
Raiku: *walks over to the main gate of the guardian community.* Do you think that if everyone is inside discussing their options that instead of hiding and being useless that we should patrol the wall of the town instead.
Kirien: I like that idea Raiku.
Jera: *whispers to himself* oh of course you do raiku said it…Anyway... Yes that would be much better than waiting for an order.
Raiku: then lets go but we should stay together so as none of us take the fall alone.
*the three walk out of the safety of the town an begin to walk around the out side of the towns boarders*
Part 3